Wednesday 9 June 2010

New story - Chapter 1: The crowd

So, I suddenly thought about a new story and I really wanted to write about it. It's a little Flyff related but it has nothing much to do with it. I just like to write about mysterious Heroes! I don't have a tittle yet so I just call it 'New Story'. Enjoy.

Oh and if you have any request about what I should write about in that story, feel free to ask me!




1. The Crowd


His bright white suit shined in the early sunlight. He waved with his big Yetti gloves to the crowd that surrounded him. Behind him lied a dark hole. Noe tried to get closer. She was curious about this person dressed in white. She was curious why everyone seemed to admire him. He looked intresting, atleast more intresting than the people she has seen passing by last days. Noe was happy with her small lenght now. She managed to get trough the crowd without any problems. On the front row the children of the city were gathered. They were reaching for the person in white, trying to touch him. She joined with them. A boy stooth near her. "Go NeocroHero!" "NeocroHero?" murmeled Noe. The boy turned his head to Noe. "Who are you?" "I'm Noe." said Noe. "Why did you say his name without any respect?" Noe frowned her eyebrows. "Why would I do that? He's just a person dressed in white." The boy got angry. "He's NeocroHero! The white Hero!" "Hero?" Noe tried to understand what that word meant. "So you mean he's a strong fighter?" concluded Noe. "What's wrong with you?" asked the boy. "Heroes are the saviours of our world. They hold all power in their hands. If one decides that you have to die, you will die. When one says you'll live a long life, you will!" Noe stared to NeocroHero. "Why, why do they exist?" The boy didn't know what to say. "We need them, they're the closest things to God." "Why would we need Gods?" asked Noe, she didn't get it. The boy sighted.

They stooth near eachother and watched to the Hero that smiled. Noe didn't know what to think. His clothes; the yetti feet, gloves, catears and white bright tuxedo, were pretty. Noe couldn't deny that. But she still didn't get why they admired him. "Tell me, why do you admire him?" tried Noe. "I admire NeocroHero cause he's the only Hero that really comes to help us." "How do you mean?" "The other Heroes barely show themselves to us, mortals." "Did you ever see another Hero but NeocroHero?" The boy his eyes stared to a far distance. "Yes. When I couldn't even speak, a Hero appeared in our town. His hair was gold. His clothes were in fire but he didn't seem to notice. His eyes were bloody red and with that he put everything in fire. There I learned my first word. Fear." Noe started to understand why they admired those 'Heroes'. Well, they didn't admire them. They feared them.

Noe stared to the boy dressed in white. His eyes didn't look red. They were shining. Altough Noe couldn't read his true feelings in it. Would he be able to make fire with those eyes? Would he really put a town in fire? Would he cause fear in this people their hearts? Suddenly the Hero looked straight in Noe's eyes. Noe shocked. Could he read minds? "I should be afraid now." thought Noe. But she wasn't. She sighted when the Hero turned his head back to the crowd. She would never get this people. She turned around and walked back trough the crowd. Then she climbed on a hill and put herself down. She stared, daydreaming and thinking about this strange appearance.

Suddenly the crowd started to applause. The Hero waved one more time and disappeared in the dark hole. The crowd turned back to the city. The boy where she talked to a few minutes ago started to climb the hill where Noe was sitting on. "Would you like to help us?" asked the boy when he reached Noe. "Help with what?" asked Noe curious. "We have to prepair a huge party for when NeocroHero comes back!" "Back from what?" "He's in that cave to kill a monster that killed many of us past weeks." Noe stared to the cave. "Ah." she said. The boy sighted and walked away. "Hey!" shouted Noe. The boy turned around. "What's is your name?" "Rui!" said the boy, and he started to run to the city.

Noe looked the the sky. It was still morning but the sun was shining heavly. "I just wish I could find some shadow to lie in." murmeled Noe. Noe her eyes narrowed when she looked to the cave again. She wanted to know more about this Heroes. She wanted to see all of them. She wanted to understand the word 'fear'. It seemed intresting and not boring. "I'm going after him." said Noe.